This one is an Ugh. I was distracted and flighty before I even got there. I tried to rein myself in, but I couldn’t get with the program.
I do think I got reasonable perspective in the foreground; that’s something. I took it home, made a list of things I could address in 30-60 minutes, and dolled it up a bit. It is improved slightly over what I left the scene with, but it’s still a wiper for sure. I’ve stared at it awhile, and I’m just not sure what its biggest fault is. Overpainted? Ham-fisted? Juvenile? Composition? Whatever it is, it has the same problem as the one with the faculty buildings at Pierce.
Wait…I see something. The light looks fake. So there’s at least one issue… 🙂